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🍓💖THO CHINH VAN💖🍓
{ Danh rieng cho thi huu vao san choi, noi van cung TinhTho XuyenlucDia .}

Loi tho luc bat my mieu
Chinh van lan dieu that phieu may ngan
Ta doi tuong ngo hop tan
Xuan tuoi nang am thu tan la roi
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Chu minh quoc ngu nen loi
Dau can thong van lam roi dieu da !
The nao cung vay nhu hoa
Nguyen am phai dung chan hoa kho tho.
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Phu am khong khac xay bo
Nen van nhat dinh don so rang ngoi !
Ep chi thong van : van roi !
Bo tim khong thau ra roi THONG qua ?
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Nghi rang thong van hai hoa
Cho tho de thoat tao hoa bon mua
That tinh ngoi but chiu thua
Phai nho ep tu nhu dua nghiep choi !
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Day bai CHINH VAN doi loi
Cho trang XUYEN LUC da khoi ban dau !
Tu ngay khai but qua lau
Ai nao de y van sau loi tho ...
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Trang nha XUYEN LUC mong cho
Tu nay ton chi khong tro mat nhin
Thuc hanh dung voi niem tin
Chung minh xay dung van nghin mau hoa...

-N3-Nguyen Ngoc Rene - Paris - 07/06/2018

Co rat nhieu ban cho rang khi dung den Thong Van ( nhung chu ep cho co van, khi viet khac nguyen am cung phu am ) la de cho bai tho de thoat, y tho bay bong troi xanh...

Trang TinhTho XuyenlucDia ra doi..mot trong nhung ton chi la : phai dung CHINH VAN, vi chu quoc ngu cua ta ngay nay rat giau den noi khong can tim lau cung co tu ngu ma nguyen am + phu am giong nhau de bat van !

Mong rang cac thi huu truoc khi chap nhan vao noi van cung trang TinhTho XuyenlucDia la da chap nhan cho ban bien tap chinh sua tho cua minh ( chinh sua van ) nham bao ve ton chi cua trang da dua ra .
Tran trong. N3.

TB :
Thi du thong van :
dong / long khong van nhau vi nguyen am O , khac am voi nguyen am O, doc se thay khac ve am thanh !

sau / sao khong van nhau , vi nguyen am ghep AU , khac voi nguyen am ghep AO , doc thi am thanh giong nhau, khi viet thi lai thay khac...

Thi du Chinh Van :
dong / dong , o , o cung nguyen am + cung phu am " ng ".
sau / mau , au , au cung nguyen am ghep ...

Noi chung TinhTho XuyenlucDia tu thuo ban dau da co ton chi ve CHINH VAN : chu van nhau bat buoc phai cung nguyen va phu am !

Sao ta lai chuong thong van ?
Co phai ...vi ta thua VAN ?
...Ta tim khong ra chu ?

N3 da mat von lieng tu 38 nam qua ... van khong chiu THUA van, ly le nao cac ban thuong ngay noi tieng VN ma chiu thua sao troi ???

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